Wednesday, 8 September 2021

Creative Writing - HL - W7 - Orange Group - Wed

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  1. Well done Sa for working so hard on your learning during lockdown. I really enjoyed reading your story. My favourite part of your story was the colourful river that was made of milkshakes. I also thought it was funny when you got a tummy ache from eating all of the candy at the rainbow! Good girl for using lots of adjectives to help us to imagine what the rainbow looked like.
    From Miss Scanlan.

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